Movie Scenes I need to See...

[Born To Kill]

Movie Scenes I Need To See...

I feel I’m slipping away, insanity’s getting closer...
I’ve sat here for 3 days watching American Psycho over and over.
Menu Select, then Scene Selection...
Too soon it ends, but begins again...just like my recent erections.
Which only go down with a pounding, as Dolby sound surrounds me.
With shrieking screams of B-movie queens and the corpses of rats around me.
It’s astounding...how VHS tapes can tear from wear and offend me...
But I couldn’t pull my stare from the home invasion scene in Henry.
What a perfect portrait he painted, he knew women were tainted...
There’s no hope cuz they’re not worth the rope you gotta use to restrain em.
I blame em...for my current situation, evacuation from life...
To this tiny, terrible world...where the TV replaces my wife.
Where the rape in I Spit on Your Grave quickly arouses my cock...
I mean, what could be more depraved than ass-fucking a girl gainst a rock?
And it’s not just women I hate, please don’t get confused...
I hold hate for their male mates for all their locker-room abuse.
Snapping towels followed by howls, consistent with that place...
So I imagine myself as Otis, when he carves off that man’s face.
Cuz the title, Devil’s Reject is exactly how I feel...
Cast out for being too evil, with a heart of steel.
Making vermin squeal, torture fills my hands with pain...
Squirming little bodies, one by one, they’re slowly slain.
As Brad Pitt throws a bad fit, screaming “What’s in the box?!?!”
I can’t help it...it’s a habit...watching Se7en around the clock.
Tasting my pound of flesh, I eat dinner raw for a slow thrill...
Succulent is this rabbit’s breast...so glad I grabbed that road-kill.
My load spills...as I jerk it again, with Bellucci on her belly...
My status: Irreversible, and I didn’t need a shrink to tell me.
I dwell, see...in this curtain-drawn home, sunlight banished...
Covered in shaving foam, as the girl from The Vanishing vanished.
Buried alive, no surprise...I’ve tried this on my own...
With clear Tupperware and rats unaware their air is only on loan.
Bucktoothed gasps against plastic, tiny limbs scratching so drastic...
Until the final twitch signals the glitch of it’s lungs being stretched like elastic.
I feel fantastic...when Pluto bags their heads and cradles their life...
Seems their One False Move, was ending up at the end of his knife.
So I’d better start wrapping this...got a date with a strapping bitch...
Just a bit of a bigg-un, but there’s more to hit when I’m slapping tits.
And crashing fists...the ad said she liked it rough, did time in the slammer...
So I’ll take the Oldboy approach and come at the bitch with a hammer.
While she stammers, “Help me, please!” and “Stop, you fuckin sicko!”
All the while, on her knees...as I lube her up with Crisco.
Then slit throat...when my dick’s completely out of fucks...
And leave her where she lays like an Ed Gein kind of rug.
Off to bed where I sleep with 4 heads...all past dates of mine...
But come morning, I’ll be horny again...High Tension on my mind.
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[Born To Kill]

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[Born To Kill]

Really?

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[Krucial Th1rt3en]

this is creative
i like how u used movies for wordplay n shit
on point throughout all of it
tight shit bro

[Futura Dust]

Man this shit was just crazy and out there and outside the box imo....I've seen the thing done with titles before but not with horror film titles....and what made it like even sicker and more humorous is that you love the gore so much that you're masturbating to it.......This was just on another level homie.....

Tasting my pound of flesh, I eat dinner raw for a slow thrill...
Succulent is this rabbit’s breast...so glad I grabbed that road-kill.
My load spills...as I jerk it again, with Bellucci on her belly...
My status: Irreversible, and I didn’t need a shrink to tell me.
I dwell, see...in this curtain-drawn home, sunlight banished...
Covered in shaving foam, as the girl from The Vanishing vanished.
Buried alive, no surprise...I’ve tried this on my own...
With clear Tupperware and rats unaware their air is only on loan.

those lines had me fucking rolling dude.

[Token]

This was fucking insane. Holy shit, Born. You practiced great intertwining of the movie titles with some references to the psycho features. Started out slightly shaky to me, but quickly smoothed itself out throughout the rest. This piece had an impact, no doubt. Great job. Hope that's not how you really are though.. lol

Nice work, Born.

[Spoken]

This was a nice somewhat original take on this piece of work. nice rhythm and the vibe i got with content was evenly asserted. lines i thought were dope then somewhat meh... as i have seen WAY BETTER from you nah mean....but ill still give you a decent feedback.

I feel I’m slipping away, insanity’s getting closer...
I’ve sat here for 3 days watching American Psycho over and over.
Menu Select, then Scene Selection...
Too soon it ends, but begins again...just like my recent erections.
Which only go down with a pounding, as Dolby sound surrounds me.
With shrieking screams of B-movie queens and the corpses of rats around me.

To me this was a nice touch dude. fuckin' great way of opening up the story line you were creating. this was nice original and very creative yet real talk. very comprehensive and understood with straight talk. cool shit B.

It’s astounding...how VHS tapes can tear from wear and offend me...
But I couldn’t pull my stare from the home invasion scene in Henry.
What a perfect portrait he painted, he knew women were tainted...
There’s no hope cuz they’re not worth the rope you gotta use to restrain em.
I blame em...for my current situation, evacuation from life...
To this tiny, terrible world...where the TV replaces my wife.
Where the rape in I Spit on Your Grave quickly arouses my cock...
I mean, what could be more depraved than ass-fucking a girl gainst a rock?
And it’s not just women I hate, please don’t get confused...
I hold hate for their male mates for all their locker-room abuse.

found a small typo nothing major just not higly expected from such a writer as you but meh right it did not take away from the read and it steady gritty... the replace my wife line was cool. loved the concept. i also want to point on how you choose to be a tad basic with your metaphors but the way you set it up is what makes it great man. i dig the vibe here though the flow here was kind of choppy sorry to say.

Snapping towels followed by howls, consistent with that place...
So I imagine myself as Otis, when he carves off that man’s face.
Cuz the title, Devil’s Reject is exactly how I feel...
Cast out for being too evil, with a heart of steel.
Making vermin squeal, torture fills my hands with pain...
Squirming little bodies, one by one, they’re slowly slain.
As Brad Pitt throws a bad fit, screaming “What’s in the box?!?!”
I can’t help it...it’s a habit...watching Se7en around the clock.
Tasting my pound of flesh, I eat dinner raw for a slow thrill...
Succulent is this rabbit’s breast...so glad I grabbed that road-kill.
My load spills...as I jerk it again, with Bellucci on her belly...
My status: Irreversible, and I didn’t need a shrink to tell me.
I dwell, see...in this curtain-drawn home, sunlight banished...
Covered in shaving foam, as the girl from The Vanishing vanished.
Buried alive, no surprise...I’ve tried this on my own...
With clear Tupperware and rats unaware their air is only on loan.

dopeness here my favorite stanza so far out of this piece... it read well and was raw with emotion. created a mind state of being perverted with succulent words man. the creative set here was crazy and original man. fresh is the air i breathe reading this BTK. liked how you worded the face cut off line and the se7en line. you watch alot of movies huh?!...lol.

Bucktoothed gasps against plastic, tiny limbs scratching so drastic...
Until the final twitch signals the glitch of it’s lungs being stretched like elastic.
I feel fantastic...when Pluto bags their heads and cradles their life...
Seems their One False Move, was ending up at the end of his knife.
So I’d better start wrapping this...got a date with a strapping bitch...
Just a bit of a bigg-un, but there’s more to hit when I’m slapping tits.
And crashing fists...the ad said she liked it rough, did time in the slammer...
So I’ll take the Oldboy approach and come at the bitch with a hammer.
While she stammers, “Help me, please!” and “Stop, you fuckin sicko!”
All the while, on her knees...as I lube her up with Crisco.
Then slit throat...when my dick’s completely out of fucks...
And leave her where she lays like an Ed Gein kind of rug.
Off to bed where I sleep with 4 heads...all past dates of mine...
But come morning, I’ll be horny again...High Tension on my mind.

dope ending...sick and twisted but thats what you were going for and it hit fantastically dude. the way you presented your words in this was spoken well... the flow through this whole verse honestly was here and there but ey... your emotino and self-proclaimed concepts dug deep enough to have me rolling dude. loved this drop and the dug the whole concept dude... big ups to you still dropping fire man...

[Sylphosus]

haha...this piece is so amusing...
U've seem to have captured what passes peoples' minds...and not only have you entertained the these wicked thoughts, but have turned them into sexual stimulants...bravo...I really njioid how u weaved these different movies together, and crafted what seems to be a normal afternoon for a lunatic...
great imagery, great flow....nice drop.

[Cody Nash]

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wow lol, good read my dude. I always enjoy your gritty dark shit.. definitely some dope lines littered throughout the read too. the vanishing lines were sick, and I liked the Otis references from Devils rejects.. you even managed to throw in one of my all time fav's Se7en.. pretty good read. also a good example/metaphor for how movies can infect a mind so much that it makes that mind want to do such acts as it recieved from watching these things.. BUT - beings that it's you writing this I'm sure you didn't mean the metaphor and you were just being the sick old creepy fucker you are


lol, nah j/p.. but hey man, enjoyed the read.. it was a fun one. thanks!



peace.

[Chrit.]

You are a sick fuck!

But word... this was good shit. Obviously its great technically, but we already expect that from you. Great read... cool way to tie everything in...

Just yeah... it was dope.

You still got it you old bastard!

[country]

thought this was fuckin nasty
i dont remember peeping anyhting from u btk

but this was off the wall

however in this part

Cuz the title, Devil’s Reject is exactly how I feel...
Cast out for being too evil, with a heart of steel.
Making vermin squeal, torture fills my hands with pain...
Squirming little bodies, one by one, they’re slowly slain.


its like it fell off for me just them four lines like the begginin was nasty them four lines was blah then the rest was nasty again

props

[HighEngineChief]

lol your like the Cable Guy without the lisp. This was dope, you had alot of good movie references, except for The Vanishing, that shit was so retarded when I watched it, my TV asked me for some French Fried Potaters( oh Billy Bob) anyway your language was smooth and fit the tone perfect plus you had a really fun story and mixed the movies in the piece without coming off as cheesy or forced.

Where the rape in I Spit on Your Grave quickly arouses my cock...
I mean, what could be more depraved than ass-fucking a girl gainst a rock?

lol^^ I knew you were the type to put it in a girls butt, prolly dry to you sick fuck lol, loved the dark humor and the playful way you arranged everything, the story was funny and gross, aswell as a cinematical journey through your fucked up recollection of movies past. Be gentle with the pussy Born, be gentle

lol dope drop.


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[Kizmit_TUC]

very good concept im diggin the flow good imagery. Props

[Ntalek]

Damn man this was some sick shit..man I'm really starting to belive that you're some kind of weirdo..lol..but this shit was vivid as fuck and I like how you used sceens from different movies to portray the emotions of the character really added an original effect to the piece as a whole..your flow was consistant throughout..and all in all I found this to be a very entertaining read...so props on a good drop my dude...

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^^^hit that for me pls..thx.

[Sentinel]

yo can i feed this?